The prompt
Score 10 of 10, Excellent
Use it when You need duty-style bullets turned into achievement bullets using numbers you can back up.
- {{target_role}}
- {{role_context}}
- {{bullets}}
- {{facts}}
Full prompt and why it works
Prompt
Rewrite the resume bullets below so they show what I achieved, not just what my job was. They are for a resume aimed at {{target_role}}, and a recruiter should see in each bullet what changed because of my work. The job these bullets come from: {{role_context}} My current bullets: """ {{bullets}} """ Facts, numbers and results I can back up (volumes, time saved, money, customers, team size, feedback): """ {{facts}} """ Task: Rewrite each bullet in this form: action verb, what I did, then the result or scale. Keep each one under 25 words, in the past tense for past jobs and the present tense for a current one. Each bullet should read as something I could explain in detail if an interviewer asked. Example of the form only (the brackets stand for values I would supply): Before: "Responsible for the weekly sales report." After: "Rebuilt the weekly sales report in [tool], cutting preparation from [X] hours to [Y] and giving [N] regional managers figures by Monday morning." Rules: - Use only numbers and results from my facts above. Never estimate, round up or invent a figure. - Where a number would help but I have not given one, write the bullet without it and add a question after it in brackets, such as [how many clients?]. - Not every result is a number. Scale (how many people or accounts), frequency, before and after, who used the work, and recognition also show impact. Use them when my facts include them. - Do not upgrade my part: if I "helped" or "supported", do not write "led" or "owned". - Start with a specific verb, and use no verb more than twice. Avoid "responsible for", "duties included", "helped to" and "various". - No first person ("I", "my"). Output format: 1. A numbered list, each original bullet followed by its rewrite. 2. "Questions that would make these stronger": up to 6 questions about results I may know but did not write down. If a bullet is too vague to rewrite without guessing what I did, keep it as it is and ask me what the work involved.
Variables
- {{target_role}}
- The kind of job you are applying for, for example "operations manager in logistics".
- {{role_context}}
- Your job title, team and what the role covered, in a line or two.
- {{bullets}}
- The bullets you want rewritten, as they are now.
- {{facts}}
- Numbers and results you could back up if asked, with where they come from if you know. Write "none" if you have none yet.
Why it works
- An example. A before and after pair with bracketed values shows the shape of an achievement bullet without handing the model numbers it might copy.
- What to avoid. Only figures you supplied may appear and verbs cannot be upgraded, so every bullet survives the interview question "how did you measure that?"
- If unsure. A missing number becomes a bracketed question after the bullet, so you know exactly what to look up instead of finding a made-up figure.